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Thespian (Haiku) by BrandonW

You didn't make me. You sure as hell let me though, let me make believe. Let me make believe. There could really be something, between you and me. Between me and you. I'm glad I found out so soon, you were an actress. You were an actress. Who did not make me believe, only make believe.

ALChemy 6-Dec-05/2:15 AM
I think what they're trying to say is that Haiku are so condensed that few people are skilled enough to make them work well. There's alot more to it than 3 lines with a 5-7-5 syllable pattern.




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