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Shoebox Thoughts (Haiku) by BrandonW

She just sat and stared at our old pictures, thinking "Was I alive then"?

wilco 3-Dec-05/2:50 PM
I think that you could maybe turn this into a free verse and give a little more info..don't give so much that it paints a FULL picture, but I just don't think the Haiku form gives you enough to get much of anything across here.




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