poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on forever mourning by outofdarkness138.

ALChemy3 Dec 2005

First two verses are weak. Does this ring a bell?

"Where, oh where are you tonight?
Why did you leave me here all alone?
I searched the world over and thought I found true love.
You met another and Phht! you were gone."

The rest of it seems to work ok.