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forever mourning (Lyric) by outofdarkness138

where did you go... where can you be... why did you leave me here alone promised to live with you through this life now you leave... that ain't right chorus: the harshest pain.. is the one that snuffs out life with no warning all the pain... blasts you like a bomb cry inside forever mourning the road i now travel on all alone, i see no end tattered in pain and rebellion whe did they take you leave us alone have to fight to get through all this pain- forever mourning chorus i struggle on... chorus

zodiac 3-Dec-05/6:30 AM
With a thumping beat I can see it working. But the vocals would have to be almost inaudible.




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