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Silent Night (Free verse) by Dovina

Silent night Wholly night Little calm Little right Neither virgin Mother nor child Wholly fragile Vibrant and wild Sleep in his heavenly peace Sleep 'round his heavenly piece

ALChemy 1-Dec-05/5:22 PM
Notice he wasn't offended by mine and I was even a little bit racist in it.

I wasn't offended. I just thought it was offensive and the other replies prove me right.




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