poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Thunder by dooley.

Dovina1 Dec 2005

Because:

"The thunder applauds us"

"spurred by lightning our hearts . . . fall in love"

"scares me to death
Brings . . . a shake to my breath"

"And there we will prove that some poems are wrong
They are wordy and gusty and go on too long"