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Chills (Free verse) by BrandonW

Shortened straws, rolled up bills, and frenetic conversation. "Oh my God, this gives me chills!" Holy insufflation! Twitchy eyes, crooked blinds, and apparently now the Lord. I'm lacking clarity of mind, I offer no accord. Sweaty pits, numbing lips, and possibly the Son. I don't see him now, but I'll need him when it's gone.

BrandonW 1-Dec-05/2:50 PM
I should have known.. it was the one line I wasn't sure about and the one line I settled on.. I'm sure I could come up with a better line.. I was just anxious to post it.. next time I'll know better




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