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Silent Night (Free verse) by Dovina

Silent night Wholly night Little calm Little right Neither virgin Mother nor child Wholly fragile Vibrant and wild Sleep in his heavenly peace Sleep 'round his heavenly piece

ALChemy 29-Nov-05/12:50 PM
No "completely" sounds just as lame and irrelevant as "wholly".

I hear St. peter and the others in heaven don't take to kindly to blasphemy.

You can make them sacred for yourself but I'd prefer to follow a prophet who's not lead around by his cock.




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