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Indian Song (Lyric) by ALChemy

Why high eye old man, bell led in my van at ease. My gray haven ain't she in sin. In christmas home aside. Solid all heft of you tour is erect for you. My eye old wild man, got it earned is said.

ALChemy 28-Nov-05/5:53 AM
Thanks. This was inspired by the cleverly cryptic "r-p-o-p-h-e-s-s-a-g-r" poem by Cummings.
Line 4 is a bit of a stretch. The 1st word of L4 is "Increased".
The 1st word of line 5 is "So".
Hope that helps a little.




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