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Due Consideration (Free verse) by Dovina

An urgent whisper rises strained I hold it back hold breath Could it sound or only crack trying To restrain that unborn word might forfeit all To give voice, gain too much and what if that whisper isn’t ‘No’? After due consideration I ignore reason Better to take whatever pain release breath and thereby know

zodiac 27-Nov-05/5:41 AM
I'd like to see Dovina's Reason cast as sexy protagonist woman and Dovina's Emotion cast as the prude seductee. They end up in a flat in Brooklyn with 2.5 kids and a Hyundai. Nights when Reason's out of town, Emotion still likes to dress in women's clothes and pretend to be "Douvinae", sexy damsel of wildly romantic melodrama.




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