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not to settle for less than almost obliteration (Free verse) by ay deee

i went a little too far yesterday there was a fire and i let it burn i wanted consumptive flames but now i can't put it back together without strong glue this happens from time to time the thrill of pushing too hard

ay deee 18-Nov-05/8:51 AM
you might be right

not the best for some cases, but as a coach pushes an athelete to perform, i also pushed my technique too hard in this particular instance

the 'it' of the second stanza refers to an object in the fire

unapt?




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