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Love letter (Lyric) by zodiac

Hey bellwether, you've been letting days run by untended-to, when but for wanting some small pleasure I'd have held this ship together. Hey lackadaisy, say, Don't shake the baby, don't break us with light. Now the phone is ringing, the porch door's swinging my back 'cross a blaze of night.

ALChemy 17-Nov-05/9:56 AM
Oh, I see it's an old post. I think I might see the hidden metaphor too.




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