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When Did You Walk Away? (Free verse) by TLRufener

The world has become confusing Everything I knew has changed The sun has hidden behind the clouds And each day it only rains A river of tears flows from my eyes The ocean waves are cold and gray My heart has shattered into a million pieces Wondering ‘when did you walk away?’ I cannot help but ask who is by your side I see you together each and every day She suits you well, better than me At least that is what you say She can keep you as long as she can I have to wonder how soon you will stray After that the roles will be switched She will ask ‘when did you walk away?’ Your life will carry on until you die Always changing opponents in you fray Each and every heart you break Will band together in strength and pray The tables will turn on you soon A girl will be the one to stray You will cry alone with your broken heart Asking, ‘when did you walk away?’

TLRufener 16-Nov-05/11:24 AM
I write my poems to help myself come to terms with feelings that I have. Many of my poems have stories behind them and out of context, they don't make sense. I just look for opinions on the writing and possible meanings to find a different way to look at them.




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