cyan916 Nov 2005

If you are going to leave feedback like this on my work, please save your energy, it shows quite a degree of disregard and emotional underdevelopement to see it as a dictionary of words rather than to view and experience the sensations of the scene unfolding. As for being formatted by a post-prime Billy Corgan, this is of no value or use, and looks like you are trying to sound more intelligent than you are. I appreciate the fact that you are giving by commenting and rating poems (which is one better than most people) but please have a think about what you are giving. This comment has served no use to me, and has caused very mild offense, what was the point?