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Abba (Free verse) by oneglove

A father's gift Though trinket defined Is untold wealth To the child it finds And words so small Not understood Withstand the beat of time Moments spent And kind words spoken One day define the man I'll grow big and strong And learn to love Me and daddy, hand in hand

oneglove 13-Nov-05/11:24 PM
words of advice that dont make sense at the time can stay with us until years later when it finally becomes clear and can help guide us. i felt like there needed to be a break somewhere in the poem and that felt like the best place.




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