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Close To The Beginning (Sonnet) by RawPunkGirl

I waited months to get close to your face Hoping that night that my fream would be exposed Being dressed in my best, clothing and lace Twas my love for you not newly composed Friends that surround us that new cool night Both of us watched as they lost all senses No matter what was to come, I would fight All of the high feelings, we had less tenses Our dark alleyway bought us together I let you see how much my feelings meant Before departing it all got better Your heat onto mine is what you had lent I thought it would last further than it did But you broke my heart and I ran and hid.

ALChemy 13-Nov-05/9:17 PM
Fro the 1st stanza of Billy Collins' "Nightclub":

You are so beautiful and I am a fool
to be in love with you
is a theme that keeps coming up
in songs and poems.
There seems to be no room for variation.
I have never heard anyone sing
I am so beautiful
and you are a fool to be in love with me,
even though this notion has surely
crossed the minds of women and men alike.
You are so beautiful, too bad you are a fool
is another one you don't hear.
Or, you are a fool to consider me beautiful.
That one you will never hear, guaranteed.




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