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Farm animals
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Ghazal
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INTRANSIT
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Bhaskaryya
9-Nov-05/8:56 PM
A great poem with some excellent metaphors. However, I hope you wouldn't mind me calling this a loose adaptation of the traditional ghazal. Ghazals are a passion with me and the traditional form comes along various rules and restrictions including rhymes and refrains.
This might help you a bit:
http://allpoetry.com/Column/784848
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