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the band (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

Singing the song in my head, listening to every beat every rythm, ryhm and reason the bass is playing in the back rythm guitar is strumming its melody lead guitar is rocking a single my lips are touching the mic belting out my notes, my lungs bellow the last note plays, look up to the sky and from the crowd we listen to their hands applouding the band, the fans jump and kick i step off the stage, wishing this was real.

zodiac 9-Nov-05/7:01 AM
That's odd. You'd think if I were 18 I'd have denied being 26, a disgraceful age if there ever was one.

Of course, what it really comes down to is, I've currently acheived the happiness I grew up thinking I was entitled to. Can you say that?




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