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The Gospel According to Zodiac (Free verse) by Dovina

In the beginning is Bob And Bob is sponge Sponge Bob All who receive Bob And believe him Become squares And wear square pants When a believer dies Bob absorbs that poor soul Mixing it with all dead souls In a soup of combined identity Bob wears square pants A symbol of his promise To square pantsed followers Thus the redeemer is called Sponge Bob Square Pants And his followers Square Pantsed Bobbers

ALChemy 1-Nov-05/12:49 PM
If you're going to use sarcasm in literature please make it at least slightly noticable. No one can hear the accentuation in your voice that makes sarcasm so common in spoken language.

PS. Try to pass that knowledge on to DA if it's at all possible.




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