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island nation (Free verse) by skaskowski

she set the coffee pot upon the stove and stoked the flame a bit. then set upon the sofa to unwind and watch her favorite flick. she must have fallen fast asleep the blaze licked off her blushing cheeks. so embarassed and so damn naive. it must have been wes anderson.

ALChemy 1-Nov-05/9:00 AM
The worst part is I misspelled cancerous. The best part is your version sounds like Buffalo Bill from Silence of the Lambs ("It puts the lotion on its skin and puts it back in the bucket again.")




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