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I don't rhyme enough, eh? (Ode) by Niphredil

Rhyming is not all-important. I know For some it's a challenge, a chance for a show, But let all beware of those who coerce Their disordered feelings to pre-ordered verse. I'm sure that a poem is oft viewed as neater When properly rhymed and according to meter If genius strikes you, by all means then rhyme; Less than that shall be denounced as a crime.

Dovina 30-Oct-05/5:07 PM
No, but I'll try it. They might come clearer babblefished via Arabic. Yes, you said that in your most recent stupor, but on 29-Oct-05/7:08 PM when you were 26 and slightly drunk, I assumed you implied the opposite. And being drunk myself, which is the only way to be when answering such guff, I fixated on it. Silly me.




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