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I don't rhyme enough, eh? (Ode) by Niphredil

Rhyming is not all-important. I know For some it's a challenge, a chance for a show, But let all beware of those who coerce Their disordered feelings to pre-ordered verse. I'm sure that a poem is oft viewed as neater When properly rhymed and according to meter If genius strikes you, by all means then rhyme; Less than that shall be denounced as a crime.

Dovina 29-Oct-05/12:34 PM
I am astonishingly smart. I always like to start with your suggestion for an answer because you think you have the perfect rebuttal. Makes it more interesting, don't you think? But I'll be honest and say that some men seem smarter than I am in certain areas. I think this because their perceptions in those areas seem better than mine. But the same man can be very silly, to the point of ridiculous, in most other areas. If I knew I was smarter in all areas there would be no point, other than for sex, to talk with him. Frankly, few men stimulate me in conversation.




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