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I don't rhyme enough, eh? (Ode) by Niphredil

Rhyming is not all-important. I know For some it's a challenge, a chance for a show, But let all beware of those who coerce Their disordered feelings to pre-ordered verse. I'm sure that a poem is oft viewed as neater When properly rhymed and according to meter If genius strikes you, by all means then rhyme; Less than that shall be denounced as a crime.

ALChemy 29-Oct-05/6:26 AM
Wow! And to think you could've dropped out of high school and still averaged the same amount of ass through your lifetime.

Of course one wonders if these men poled were hooked up to a lie detector or not.
I think women would rather be smarter than their men. Lets ask Dovina.




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