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All teeth when not. (Free verse) by ifni

all twisted around myself wondering is he waiting for me? or should I still wait for him? prickly friendship, the beartrap mood, he has a temper like a pit bull, all sweet when right and all teeth when not; guess I'd better call him. 8.15.01 jv

anonymous 10-May-02/11:01 AM
Done-to-death subject matter, but above-average use of language, with impressive attention paid to those sharp consonant sounds in the middle lines. The author seems to have a developing talent.




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