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fox and hounds (Free verse) by nentwined

ceremonial baboon laughs full at the moon and rain, fox and hounds let out to play; cunning acid drives his running thighs; tonight one anger will be denied.

ALChemy 25-Oct-05/7:00 AM
Why baboon? I assume it means the fox.
besides the dogs anger, who else has anger and why?
The one anger actually seems to imply one out of two or more. "an anger" would be clearer.

This would make a great introduction to something.
Love the suggestion of rhyme in this poem.




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