poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on fox and hounds by nentwined.

ALChemy25 Oct 2005

Why baboon? I assume it means the fox.
besides the dogs anger, who else has anger and why?
The one anger actually seems to imply one out of two or more. "an anger" would be clearer.

This would make a great introduction to something.
Love the suggestion of rhyme in this poem.