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fox and hounds (Free verse) by nentwined

ceremonial baboon laughs full at the moon and rain, fox and hounds let out to play; cunning acid drives his running thighs; tonight one anger will be denied.

zodiac 25-Oct-05/2:31 AM
Well, you were never going to be able to get away with the moon's laughter running down your thigh. Nice attempt.




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