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10/8 (Free verse) by cronus

I have sacrificed all that I loved in the arms of an uncaring god you may say that I've gone too far but I know its not nearly enough

zodiac 11-Oct-05/6:08 AM
The line should have read, "Not that different from some of David's poems," AND HE'S DEAD. I considered changing it, but I'd already clogged your email with slight revisions and, appearances aside, I actually do love you better than that.




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