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Are you my love? (Free verse) by Prince of Void

Are you my love? Is it wonderful to know? All the dreams All the dreams Could end in my selfishness But my mind is happy Need to learn to let it go I know you meant a world to me But since you have been changed I’ve been lost inside Tried and failed as my tears fell down And I wish you could see the love in my eyes The best memories we had Burying me in thousand times of agony Frozen alive in the coldness of a frozen heart But what’ else could I say? Since everything has gone wrong Seems there is no one there Unspeakably disillusioned within despairs Shall I rise like sea again? Shall I be range against dying light? Finally did we loss ourselves? The love that death has no dominion The love never been lost But it just divides us And it’s wearing me down And it’s keeping me captivated And it’s keeping me fascinated Now to find it out Where I see You are still the love couldn’t perish Let me sink in the ocean of divination and devotion Where are you when I die to see you? Your are my dream Your are my love This poem is dedicated to the beloved {bohemian_empress}

Tintagiles 25-Sep-05/8:10 PM
It seems to be missing the occasional 'that' and 'the'.




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