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My Office (Free verse) by Tascobar

I sit here There is an attractive girl next to me I scratch myself She looks across, then away I scratch myself, more vigorously than before She is looking An attractive girl She now thinks I have crabs I think I'll get drunk tonight.

The troubled sinner 4-Sep-02/11:45 AM
Everyone scratches themselves at work. If we didn't we'd have to do something like type. She won't think you've got crabs. Hopefully. I lilke the triotic curve you give it with the last two lines. Wonderful work.




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