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Please Stay (Free verse) by pletcgm

It’s been a brief four months, Four months I wish was a lifetime. You gave me happiness, Happiness I have never felt. Knowing our time is slipping, My mind is in a trance. I have thought of nothing, Nothing but you. I have thought of the times, The times we spent together. All the times I looked at you, And my heart fluttered. Now, my heart is bleeding, Bleeding a river of love. It’s bleeding to the surface, All my feelings for you. As the final day approaches, I ask of you one last thing. Will you make my heart flutter again? Please stay

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Sep-05/4:37 PM
I probed your poeme with one of these: http://www.collectorman.com/images/S608.jpg , and it told me you were missing something in your life. Something, or someone... someone close to you. -10-




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