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remembering you (Free verse) by sapphire_rain7

i want to go to bed tonight and dream of hot summer the moon's white light feel your skin and taste your sweat the best of you i haven't seen yet and i never will i'm afraid, love you're gone forever and the willows weep this cold rain doesn't wash away humid kisses, wet hands, clinging memories, and words unsaid

Heather Dee 17-Sep-05/3:36 PM
I think this is rather good!




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