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Creation (Free verse) by Quarton

In times long past, the universe was born, fiery explosion, fabric of space/time torn. Infinite density freed by powers unknown, our future being from singularity sown. Over time, nascent universe cooled, hydrogen and helium together pooled. New stars formed at a rapid pace, creating light in the dark empty space. Supernovae exploded and eventially collapsed, creating black holes in reality's contrast. Elements then formed, ignited into being, life's ingredients, in diversity weaving. Over time, newborn planets appeared, on earth, creation's song then heard. In evolution's sure hands we entrust, essence composed of recycled stardust. We gaze outward; of fantasies dream, moon made shadows under heavenly gleam. Ancient singularity over eons of time, beckons to all; thoughts ennobled, sublime.

Caducus 15-Sep-05/9:29 AM
Pretty good and technically sound it just seems a bit anonymous. Try and do one without the emphasis on rhyme it may be more punchy.




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