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My Big Butt (Free verse) by Dovina

My butt is big and round like the letter D. It’s my ambassador to those who walk behind, a pit bull herding skinny women away from the best deals at clothing sales. My butt is big and those who scorn it are invited to kiss it.

LilMsLadyPoet 13-Sep-05/11:55 AM
are invited to kindly kiss it. Maybe would be better rhythm there? And is Pitbull one word? Pit-bull, maybe? just wondering, seems like it might be one of those. Cute poem!




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