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Tall Windows (Free verse) by tianyi

He remembers A boy cross-legged on the carpet In the beige of an overexposed photo Where, streams of light like a cathedral bright face into the drifting dust And tries to breathe it in.

Tintagiles 12-Sep-05/7:13 PM
Why the comma after "where"? I'm presuming that the last line is the direct continuation of the first, in which case it might be a thought to add a stanza break between the first and second lines.




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