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First Love (Free verse) by Dovina

The brilliant sunrise Of this winter morning Turned to bright reality of day. I wasn’t winter-broken, I thought it would stay.

zodiac 3-Sep-05/4:22 AM
Um, because seasons and sunrises USUALLY stay? Forgive me if I think the problem's your expectation, not the sunrise.




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