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Katrina (Free verse) by jessicazee

The hurricane is a galaxy on TV The bayou folk ride alligators with charms and hexes Dead bodies float or sink the Civil War veterans The quarter is French submerged a truly sea level A levee breaks just like the song calamity, a wet

Dovina 2-Sep-05/11:14 AM
Yeah, It does look like a galaxy from space. A comma after sink would clarify. A wet what?




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