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Katrina
(
Free verse
) by
jessicazee
The hurricane is a galaxy on TV The bayou folk ride alligators with charms and hexes Dead bodies float or sink the Civil War veterans The quarter is French submerged a truly sea level A levee breaks just like the song calamity, a wet
T. Jonathron Remp
2-Sep-05/10:29 AM
Could be really good, but the line "The quarter is French" is quite odd. Almost as odd as the French. Perhaps that's what you meant by it...
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