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Katrina (Free verse) by jessicazee

The hurricane is a galaxy on TV The bayou folk ride alligators with charms and hexes Dead bodies float or sink the Civil War veterans The quarter is French submerged a truly sea level A levee breaks just like the song calamity, a wet

INTRANSIT 31-Aug-05/6:17 AM
I like the first and second stanzas. 3 needs its lines shuffled and delete the -the- in the fourth, this will connect the two. take a rasp to the english and the end seems to be dangling, unfinished, as if suddenly washed away. ees goot.




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