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Jack (Free verse) by Dovina

I was a branch, void of leaves, naked and brittle, adjusted to cold, and could outlast winter. He fell gently on me, like a snowflake, not needed, but warm, like a spring leaf returned, when a leaf must die, yet he rested softly, a repairer of breaches, where no lack I saw, restorer of forgotten paths, creator of places dwell in.

ALChemy 30-Aug-05/5:04 AM
I know what a pun is. It just appeared as though you were actually trying to correct her spelling. "And a repairer of breeches too." would have been clearer. Sorry I'll try to recognise the humor the next time.




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