ALChemy30 Aug 2005

Thanks.
Don't know how I missed "brain's".
I dropped the periods at the end of the lines for a cleaner look.
I see now I missed one of the little boogers.
In the transition I used capital letters to imply the start of a new sentence at the beggining of a line. Maybe I'll have to put all the periods back.
I'm glad you liked the first stanza. I spent more time re-editing that first stanza then I did on the rest of the poem.