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Present, tense (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I had built a beautiful home right down to its stained glass windows.

nentwined 30-Aug-05/12:52 AM
hm.

why the apostrophe on its?

I'm seeing this as a puzzle, but I don't see the first bit of string to unravel.

I need something more to make it tense, and I'd rather it actually be in present tense.

Or I'm missing the cosmic joke, which would not be that unusual...




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