ALChemy29 Aug 2005

I think a period after "snowflake" and losing the comma after "warm" and "returned" might clarify things.

Is the last line missing a word or maybe "ed" at the end of "dwell".

It's a good little love poem.

Jack is either a rebound lover or Jack Frost?
Hell Jack could even be the dog. But if you were to tell me that Jack was the name of your vibrator I'd piss my pants laughing and proclaim you super-genius.