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orange crumble (Free verse) by impert&ent

rough surfaces brick meets mortar brushed with moss bricks spall and crumble mortar falls away black gaps mark the separation grey orange green and black the colours of a wall

impert&ent 25-Aug-05/11:59 PM
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