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Pity Her (Free verse) by Dovina

Self aggrandizement, she remembers it well, the notion of greatness beyond possible consummation, then realization, and finally, admission. Driven by irony that something so darling could be so disappointing, she pours another glass, points the pistol, and . . .

zodiac 24-Aug-05/3:51 AM
Ha ha. Not EVEN in the least. Pity me, I spend 23 hours a day speaking the most stupid imaginable language. For example, this poem in street Arabic would go something like:

Thinking a lot, she remembers it a lot,
the notion of lot-itude
past the possibility you are together,
then you think,
and at the end, you say.

You move by funny thought that
something so nice
will disappoint you a lot,
she pours one more glass,
moves the gun,
and . . .




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