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Playing The Vibes (Free verse) by impert&ent

anchors fall scoring planes deep in crossing no word is so calm kites adrift marking time glancing among chorals no image is so clear ropes lie writing curls fuming around brass no touch is so plain

ALChemy 21-Aug-05/8:55 AM
If you changed ropes to hoses than it could be about 9/11 although the fuming part is still questionable.

But you get your aeroplanes that way.




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