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First (Free verse) by Dovina

Adam may be the first man, but Jerry was the first boy. Adam gave a rib for Eve. Jerry gave some daffodils.

zodiac 20-Aug-05/4:49 AM
I spent an hour last week trying to write a reply explaining why I didn't like it. Then I thought, well shit it's not like she spent an hour writing the poem in the first place. I also spent a long night reading Genesis last week and have decided Genesis is demeaning to women and you are demeaning to women. This shouldn't come as a surprise to you. The only way to make Genesis not-demeaning (which, I should add, I do as a matter of course) is by being flexible enough to squeeze through your own asshole. On top of that, I have very little idea what you mean by this poem.




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