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First (Free verse) by Dovina

Adam may be the first man, but Jerry was the first boy. Adam gave a rib for Eve. Jerry gave some daffodils.

zodiac 20-Aug-05/4:45 AM
I really really really didn't like it. As poetry or anything else. No hard feelings, I hope.




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