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Playing The Vibes (Free verse) by impert&ent

anchors fall scoring planes deep in crossing no word is so calm kites adrift marking time glancing among chorals no image is so clear ropes lie writing curls fuming around brass no touch is so plain

ALChemy 19-Aug-05/10:20 AM
God I wish I had a yacht. Sounds so relaxing. Then again with my luck I'd get lost or die in a storm.

I liked the poem once I figured it out.

Another title that might have changed the poems direction: At the Center of the Tsunami.
But that's just plain evil isn't it.

I think you mean "Plain" not "plane in verse 1. Plain is on the sea-bed. Plane is something you do on the surface as in hydroplane.




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