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Little Orange Petal Flower (Free verse) by i_am_the_popsicle

My spirit is a little orange petal flower Orange petal flowers Bloom in Spring Thrive in Summer Fade in Autumn Die in Winter Little petal flowers in your hair are far more lovely than they are on the ground Little orange flowers in your room are far more romantic than they are on the ground Little orange petals Smell nice in Spring Look vibrant in Summer Ride the breeze in Autumn Shed tears in Winter And my spirit is a little orange petal flower

drnick 18-Aug-05/1:55 AM
It reminds me of the seasonal-depression I expierience. The winter is horrible. The summer is awesome. You're poem is alright.




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