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Never born. (Free verse) by | Broken |

It's really weird When you cannot grasp something which is right beside you Something which is just a breath away Just inches from where you are standing now It seems to get farther away The moment you reach out for it The moment you long for it It just scampers off Living you all alone In solitude Then you start to wonder Whether it's all real Whether everything seems to be too good to be true Or just something virtual Are you actually living in your fantasies? Planning about your perfect life Imagine that it could happen Just hoping and wishing That everything will turn out right for you The way you always dream it to be In that deep corner of your heart You know that it would never happen Everything's fake .. You are fated to live life this way You never get all the sweetest things in life .. Sweet? Yeah .. But consider it sweet nothings that will never end .. Are you brave enough to look at your reflection for another day .. It won't be that much long now .. When you're tired of it .. And you just wish that .. You were never born in this world.

zodiac 6-Aug-05/3:18 AM
That's silly. That the situation is "ideal" MEANS that it's going to provide satisfaction. At least, as far as most people are concerned. Whose IDEAL of marriage (that is, whose vision of a PERFECT marriage) is misery? CS would have done better to say "people fall short of realizing their ideal circumstances" or "people make up stupid ideals, like a Porsche and a wife who makes waffles naked." Also, CS Lewis is a bint.




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